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"Would
You Like Kame Hame Ha With That?" by Fade
At FanFiction.Net Not so much a Vegeta/Bulma Fic as it is a Vegeta Fic, this one takes a great idea and presents it well. Bulma, fed up with sponging off of her father's Capsule Corp. fortune, demands that Vegeta get a job and bring home a paycheck like a normal husband (if he could ever be considered as such). What ensues can only be described as flat out funny. This is because, my friends, our hapless Saiyan Prince is about to tackle the Golden Arches... Now, come on. We all want to know what would happen if Vegeta were to get a job. Frankly, we all have to admit that if we lived in the DBZ Universe, and we worked in an office building accross the street where someone like Vegeta were to get a job, wouldn't we have a "Who's the weird guy gonna kill next Poll?" Will it be the manager? Or the sassy teenage chicks managing the counter? Will he destroy the drive thru, or blast the fry vats? What's not to anticipate? This one's a bit further into DBZ than I'm used to, as Trunks is already mobile on his own, and Goten has been born as well. I haven't seen the Buu saga yet, nor have I seen GT. But I do understand their characters. For example, Trunks is much different than Mirai Trunks. Mirai Trunks is shy yet wise. This Trunks is a spoiled brat, thanks to his mother, and in part to his father, really... This one was well written. It actually read like something I'd be inclined to write, so I settled right in. Fade has a great writing style. The story moves well, and his cliffs are quite amusing and leave you anxious for the next part. The classic "Get a Job" model is well used, too. Alot of DBZ fans would love to see Vegeta pounding the sidewalks looking for applications. Just like we all did. Ha ha. Along the way, Fade's author notes seem to suggest that he isn't as happy as he could be with the story. While I know it's not my place to judge that sentiment, I feel that a statement like that isn't really necessary. Fade is a very good writer, and his humor is great. I found the story very funny! This statement, however, doesn't detract at all from the story, or my impression of it. I found it to be great. This one's a deffinate keeper on my list, and if you like good FanFiction, I'd say it belongs on your list, too. This one is lots of fun, and even has our favorite hipster/monk, Krillin!
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